Lonely Monsters reworked page

So as I continue to get new pages done up for book one of Lonely Monsters I'm also reworking the grey-tones for the first 24 pages. I was happy with the original tones that appeared in issue #1 at the time, but a few things bugged me about the technique I was using. So when the decision was made to drop the single issue cycle and switch to the graphic novel format I decided to redo the tones for the first issue. Here's a reworked page......
















Matt